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Moggyzulu
03-27-2009, 03:14 AM
Well, i have had this idea for a while.... so here it is.



Genre
Drama


Special Notice- Because this "series" does not yet have a name,

any reference towards any type of title will be represented by (U.).

Setting, Prologue, & Characters.

(U.) is based inside of the World of Warcraft universe, with

some reference, ( well the whole back story is based upon-) to the lore that

Blizzard has already put into place. The story will NOT include many of the

heroes of the franchise Lore ( there are reasons to this continue reading to

find out.)

Prologue: It is 5 years in the future within the world of

Azeroth. Over these 5 years many events have DRASTICALLY changed the world

Politically. The Horde and Alliance have split into three factions. The Horde

has been split on brutal terms. The orc's noble leader, Thrall, has been

Assassinated by a Group of Elite Alliance Mercenaries hired by Varian Wrynn as

a plan to destroy the Horde.

The Orcs and Trolls: After learning the fate of their once great leader, the

Orcs have gone berserk, almost acting in a worse manner than shown in the

day's of the Orc's Bloodcurse. The Troll's have been inspired by the orc's

actions. Thrall was, indeed, viewed just as Nobel by the Troll's, who feel

they are still in debt to him. The Orc's are being lead by the war hungry

Garrosh Hellscream. Garrosh has ordered MASSACRE on all humans, in result

causing the RE- corruption of the Orc's But, not all hope is lost, Saurfang

has been gradually rallying the Horde in order to bring order and reclaim the

old ways of the Orc's. But, Saurfang is growing old, and the orc's need a new

hero to lead them. This Bring's in our OWN character , Grok' Toral. Or- put

simply simply- Toral. Can Toral and Saurfang Unite the Horde, or will all of

there efforts be at a loss. The fate of the Orc's is in their hands.

The Tauren and Nightelves: After witnessing the brutal actions of the Orc's,

the Tauren have left the horde They are keeping contact with Saurfang's side,

( this "New horde" does not yet have a name to it.) but many of the tauren

have joined the Nightelves. The Nightelve's were in GREAT disagreement with

the Actions of Varian and left the Alliance to Focus on their leader

Malfurion. Malfurion is STILL trapped inside of the Emerald Dream, but is

starting to show signs of coming back. They believe that Malfurion can help

them with the Problem's that the Scourge is putting on the rest of Azeroth. (

there will be more added to this as it is developed).

The Undead and Bloodelves: While these two are not drastically unchanged,

Sylvanas is realizing the Horde is failing and is on the verge of leaving the

Horde and Searching for "other means of help . ( not much on the elves atm.)

The Humans: ON THE VERGE OF EXTINCTION. The Alliance are losing the war that

their leader has started. AS a matter of fact this war was caused by the

careless actions of one man. Varian ( who was banished by his people), has

gone in to hiding, in fear of being killed by his own. Yet, in these dark

times Hero's are beginning to emerge. ( unnamed hero) is a human male who has

earned a name in the eyes of his people. The faction that Assassinated Thrall,

is public enemy number one for the Humans of Stormwind, while at the same time

he is freeing humans from Orc encampment's. (No name) isn't alone in his

journey though, he is accompanied by his Brother -( still no name)-.( not

going to say any more for the simple reason of it not being fully developed

and not having what IS known to me be told to you guys yet :P.)

Dwarves and Gnomes: sorry not much here yet they are still with SW but the

gnomes have some ideas of their own.

The Scourge: The Scourge grows stronger by the day. ( yet, so does the

Forsaken.). ( STILL NEED HUGE EVENT THAT THEY ARE DOING THAT MAKES THEM A MUCH

BIGGER THREAT THAN BEFORE.)

I apologize for anything that doesn't make sense, I am still working on the

story and am stuck in some points. Any criticism is welcome. I would LOVE some

name ideas, and if you have any ideas that you would like to see, PLEASE,

share with me! Hopefully you are looking forward to this machinima series and

hope that the community can be a big part of it.


ALSO- This is going to be my FIRST machinima EVER so I am new to the site and

do not know much about the state of machinima, I just thought it would be a

good thing to share with you guys! ENJOY!


-Mogram, Zuluhed server.

Mogha
05-05-2009, 11:22 PM
I have a few ideas for the Dwarves and Gnomes.

Gnomes sided with the Alliance because they said they would help get their capital city back and which never did. Perhaps you can put this into the Story as well, maybe they were fed up with the Alliance and split up from them but keeping close ties with Dwarven Brothers.

The Dwarves are the Humans biggest allys, and I doubt they'll ever split from the Alliance. So I'm pretty sure they would side with Varian as Humans and Dwarves hate Orcs. That you can tell by because of Alterac Valley? hah. But if you need anything contact me on AIM Ryplaya2133

Dwârv
05-06-2009, 02:00 AM
Don't want to discourage you, but this looks like a BIG project to me...
Are you sure you can handle this (especially cause it's your first try in machinima ever)?

In other words: I would always recommend to make a short movie (like, a music clip, e.g.) first, to get a grip on your moviemaking software.