Need some feedback

Terwilliger · 08-28-2007, 05:30 AM

I was thinking about using the very little skills I have to attempt to make a decently edited PvP video.

This is what I have so far for an intro, can you tell me what you think?

http://files.filefront.com/insomniaw.../fileinfo.html

Dwârv · 08-28-2007, 05:54 AM

First of all : nice job.
I like your editing, and I like the music you've chosen.
But I am pretty shure, that quite a few people will have a problem with the music. It is to "psycho" for the average watcher, I think.Don't change it, just be prepared for some "strange" comments on that.
In the last part of the trailer there were some "breaks" in the music, that could need some visual cuts to accompanie them. You could put some "freeze-frames" or colour effects to go with it. Else I would tell the people more about what they have to expect. Some lines like "witness the power of a druid in fury" or "14/0/35 in action" (I know there is no 14/0/35, just wanted to give the idea) or "a movie by Terwilliger", stuff like that. Last thing: give an estimated time of release.

Don't want to sound negative, cause like I said, me personal I like the trailer more than I dislike it.
But these are the things I missed a little and that would make the trailer more round.
Looking forward to the final version

Dwârv

Terwilliger · 08-28-2007, 06:51 AM

Thanks for the feedback.

First of all, it isn't a trailer. It is just what I have made on the movie so far, I just wanted some feedback on the style of movie and if I should go ahead with it.

I don't plan on making a trailer since I have no idea what to put in it, and when the movie is going to be finished.

I do plan on putting some more visual effects to sync with the music, but I have only been working on the movie for about a day, so I just wanted to get some feedback before I wasted too much time on it.

I still need more PvP clips. I am hoping to make it mostly about me vs people with full gladiator gear/high ratings/really good weapons.

So far I have some clips of me dueling and winning against:

http://www.wowarmory.com/character-s...eden&n=Ryoujin
A fully merciless gladiator MS warrior with skillherald.

http://www.wowarmory.com/character-s...n=Flurrykiller
Another (gladiator rank) fully merciless gladiator elemental shaman.

http://www.wowarmory.com/character-s...jaeden&n=Zilea
Gladiator holy paladin

http://www.wowarmory.com/character-s...7jaeden&n=Vaux
Gladiator rank rogue with WARGLAIVE OF AZZINOTH MAINHAND

So if I get some more of these clips, it will end up being a pretty good movie, imo.

I was also thinking of getting some 2v2 arena (feral druid/holy priest) clips, and some BG/world pvp clips.

yoshi245 · 08-28-2007, 08:47 AM

I liked it. Good quality for 49mb and just under 3min. Good editting/music too. Looking forward to the full movie.

I do have one question though, did you perhaps change one of the models? I haven't played a feral druid but I noticed one of your attacks has animation of arcane missles hitting your target. So that one confuses me.

Terwilliger · 08-28-2007, 08:56 AM

That is from my pet that I summoned from my netherwing rep item.

DlouBent · 08-28-2007, 12:52 PM

So youre saying, that youre not a mage? :'( My whole dream of having a moderator that plays mage is GONNE :'(

Nice movie man

Wanna see a mage one ^^ Good editing overall, gief full movie!

Terwilliger · 08-29-2007, 05:53 AM

Thanks for the feedback. I guess I will go ahead with it

DlouBent · 08-29-2007, 03:35 PM

First make a mage version

Terwilliger · 08-30-2007, 10:08 AM

I'll be uhh... sure to... uh... do that....?

08-28-2007, 05:30 AM	#1
Terwilliger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 443	Need some feedback I was thinking about using the very little skills I have to attempt to make a decently edited PvP video. This is what I have so far for an intro, can you tell me what you think? http://files.filefront.com/insomniaw.../fileinfo.html __________________ Don't Mod It. It takes years to build trust, and just seconds to destroy it.

08-28-2007, 05:54 AM	#2
Dwârv Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 267	First of all : nice job. I like your editing, and I like the music you've chosen. But I am pretty shure, that quite a few people will have a problem with the music. It is to "psycho" for the average watcher, I think.Don't change it, just be prepared for some "strange" comments on that. In the last part of the trailer there were some "breaks" in the music, that could need some visual cuts to accompanie them. You could put some "freeze-frames" or colour effects to go with it. Else I would tell the people more about what they have to expect. Some lines like "witness the power of a druid in fury" or "14/0/35 in action" (I know there is no 14/0/35, just wanted to give the idea) or "a movie by Terwilliger", stuff like that. Last thing: give an estimated time of release. Don't want to sound negative, cause like I said, me personal I like the trailer more than I dislike it. But these are the things I missed a little and that would make the trailer more round. Looking forward to the final version Dwârv __________________ RunningDwârv productions

08-28-2007, 06:51 AM	#3
Terwilliger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 443	Thanks for the feedback. First of all, it isn't a trailer. It is just what I have made on the movie so far, I just wanted some feedback on the style of movie and if I should go ahead with it. I don't plan on making a trailer since I have no idea what to put in it, and when the movie is going to be finished. I do plan on putting some more visual effects to sync with the music, but I have only been working on the movie for about a day, so I just wanted to get some feedback before I wasted too much time on it. I still need more PvP clips. I am hoping to make it mostly about me vs people with full gladiator gear/high ratings/really good weapons. So far I have some clips of me dueling and winning against: http://www.wowarmory.com/character-s...eden&n=Ryoujin A fully merciless gladiator MS warrior with skillherald. http://www.wowarmory.com/character-s...n=Flurrykiller Another (gladiator rank) fully merciless gladiator elemental shaman. http://www.wowarmory.com/character-s...jaeden&n=Zilea Gladiator holy paladin http://www.wowarmory.com/character-s...7jaeden&n=Vaux Gladiator rank rogue with WARGLAIVE OF AZZINOTH MAINHAND So if I get some more of these clips, it will end up being a pretty good movie, imo. I was also thinking of getting some 2v2 arena (feral druid/holy priest) clips, and some BG/world pvp clips. __________________ Don't Mod It. It takes years to build trust, and just seconds to destroy it.

08-28-2007, 08:56 AM	#5
Terwilliger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 443	That is from my pet that I summoned from my netherwing rep item. __________________ Don't Mod It. It takes years to build trust, and just seconds to destroy it.

08-28-2007, 12:52 PM	#6
DlouBent Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Denmark Posts: 241	So youre saying, that youre not a mage? :'( My whole dream of having a moderator that plays mage is GONNE :'( Nice movie man Wanna see a mage one ^^ Good editing overall, gief full movie! __________________ http://www.warcraftmovies.com/movieview.php?id=45449

08-28-2007, 08:47 AM	#4
yoshi245 Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 80	I liked it. Good quality for 49mb and just under 3min. Good editting/music too. Looking forward to the full movie. I do have one question though, did you perhaps change one of the models? I haven't played a feral druid but I noticed one of your attacks has animation of arcane missles hitting your target. So that one confuses me.

08-29-2007, 05:53 AM	#7
Terwilliger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 443	Thanks for the feedback. I guess I will go ahead with it __________________ Don't Mod It. It takes years to build trust, and just seconds to destroy it.

08-29-2007, 03:35 PM	#8
DlouBent Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Denmark Posts: 241	First make a mage version __________________ http://www.warcraftmovies.com/movieview.php?id=45449

08-30-2007, 10:08 AM	#9
Terwilliger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 443	I'll be uhh... sure to... uh... do that....? __________________ Don't Mod It. It takes years to build trust, and just seconds to destroy it.